Tourism is the backbone of the national income. Many
tourists come to Egypt
annually to enjoy its beauty. Egypt
has lots of attractions such as its weather, its monuments and its kind people.
Tourists can visit lots of historical places such as the pyramids and the
sphinx. They can also visit lots of temples. Especially those in Luxor and Aswan.
Lots of tourists prefer visiting Abu simple temple, Elkarnak and Hatshbsot Temple. Egypt also has coastal cities such
as Alex, sharm elsheikh and Hurghada which foreigners love to stay in. To cut
it short, the government should due most care to protect tourists and to
provide them with all their needs. Ass a result, Egypt would be one of the most
developed countries within few years.
Very good., but there are a few mistakes to be considered:
ReplyDelete1-you didn't indent your paragraph.
2-A better concluding sentence should be added.
3-""They can also visit lots of temples. Especially those in Luxor and Aswan. Lots of tourists prefer visiting Abu simple temple, Elkarnak "". don't start a new sentence with the word"especially"